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August 2, 2012
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Lighting your way with a torch lamp, 
can you see what's really true?
Head in the clouds instead of feet on the ground, 
is what they tell you.

But night can be day, and hell can be heaven, and loss can be love in your eyes.
The cold touch of the pavement is a kiss from an angel, and no one ever tells lies.

The bottom of a bottle is the top of your list, 
and you won't even notice blood coating your fist.

The downward spiral is just the spinning in your head, 
and it doesn't matter to you where you tread.

But a low is not a high 
and a sin is not a virtue.
Lighting your way with a torch lamp, 
you can't see what's really true.

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...I need to write happier stuff :I
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~SethCoal Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Haha, but happier stuff isn't half as deep. :icondeepthoughtplz: You're a great writer. I love your poems. What is this one about?
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*KoohiiJuusuMuzu Aug 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Aha, that is very true! Awh thankyouu :icontardglompplz:
I guess it's about someone on self destruct. Someone who is drinking and can't see how things really are but rather see what they want to; kind of like they're in denial. And like when you use a torch, you can only see a small area and not the whole thing; they can't see the big picture to what they're doing. Aha I'm not really sure, it came out of no where.
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~SethCoal Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Haha, no need to thank, you really are. :icon815glomp:
Hmmmm, ah yeah I understand. That's really interesting, the torch thing. Haha, that's how the best ideas come :icontardglompplz:
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